I think that the The Last Jedi fight choreographies were excellent.
Is this correct?
Yes.
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More idiomatically:
I think that the choreography for the fights in The Last Jedi was excellent.
(No, you don't put two "the"s together like that.)
CJ
You drop an initial article when referring to a title that way. For instance, "in Dickens's Tale of Two Cities …". Your sentence becomes "I think that the Last Jedi fight choreographies were excellent." It is still wrong, though. That "the" unavoidably tries to be the one in the title, calling attention to itself in a distracting way. You have to recast, maybe "I think that the f