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Mr. Tom Posted 11 years ago
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The teacher felt that some of the students performing...
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Could you please edit these lines?
The teacher felt that some of the students performing in the item song were too stiff – they needed to relax their muscles and bring about?? more rhythm in the dance.
Thanks,
Tom
Could you please edit these lines?
The teacher felt that some of the students performing in the item song were too stiff – they needed to relax their muscles and bring about?? more rhythm in the dance.
Thanks,
Tom
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" What's an item song?
- " What's an item song?
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Probably better: "they needed to relax their muscles and bring more rhythm to the dance."
What's an item song?
What's an item song?
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