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Anita_a Posted 21 years ago
The Sweet smell...
The sweet smell
of the wet mud,
like the smell of
my favourite cake baking,
reached my nostrils.
The water drops
on the triangular shaped
gree leaf on the tree,
danced a tango.
The music of the breeze
wheezed through the tree,
against the back ground
of the pitter-patter
of the rain,
like the slow beat
of the drum
in the silence
of heavenly solitude.
I watched on
till the rhythm
reached my feet.
of the wet mud,
like the smell of
my favourite cake baking,
reached my nostrils.
The water drops
on the triangular shaped
gree leaf on the tree,
danced a tango.
The music of the breeze
wheezed through the tree,
against the back ground
of the pitter-patter
of the rain,
like the slow beat
of the drum
in the silence
of heavenly solitude.
I watched on
till the rhythm
reached my feet.
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Anita, I really appreciate your poems and I read them all. You've got the true feeling of the poet. Thanks dear in advance,I'd appreciate your reply.
- Anita, I really appreciate your poems and I read them all.
- You've got the true feeling of the poet.
- Thanks dear in advance,I'd appreciate your reply.
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Anita, I really appreciate your poems and I read them all. You've got the true feeling of the poet. I,m a Saudi female student and if you don't mind I want to ask you a question.Well, dear would you feel upset if I told you that I want to copy some of your poems, I admire your way of writing.Also,( I hope you're not sick of my questions) may I ask you when you started composing poems and how you
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Anita, I really like this poem as well as all of your previous poems.You've got the true feeling of the poet.Please tell me, if you don't mind, about the time you started composing poems and which poet you prefer most.I'd appreciate your reply and thanks in advance.
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Thanks anonymous and the sweet desert for reading and appreciating my poems. I'm still learning to write good poetry, though my so called poetry writing started a very long time back.I stopped writing for 4-5 years due to busy schedule of academics. I started writing again 2 years back.
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