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Mr. Tom Posted 6 years ago
Vocabulary

The sun had set and a strange orange had enveloped ...

Hi

Is this sentence fully natural?

(Start of a story)

The sun had set and a strange orange had enveloped the environment.

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The sun had set and a strange orange had covered the sky.

Thanks,

Tom

  

Top answer

The first is unnatural. The second is possible.

  • The first is unnatural.
  • The second is possible.
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The first is unnatural. The second is possible.

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My attempt:

The sun had set and a diffuse orange glow pervaded the atmosphere.

CJ

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