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Mr. Tom Posted 8 years ago
Vocabulary

The sun had risen and the sky was brightening up slowly.

Hi

Is this sentence fully natural?

The sun had risen and the sky was brightening up slowly.

Thanks,

Tom

  

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You need a comma after "risen". The image is a bit puzzling, but the English is fine.

— Anonymous

  • You need a comma after "risen".
  • The image is a bit puzzling, but the English is fine.
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You need a comma after "risen". The image is a bit puzzling, but the English is fine.

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I'd have written this:

The sun had risen, and the sky was slowly brightening.

CJ

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