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Adonis Posted 20 years ago
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The suage of English sentences. Thank you

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01font001. It seems extreme and exaggerated to state that the true value of civilization primarily relies on its artistic creation instead of its scientific achievements. The fact is that the true value of a civilization should integrate its artistic creations with scientific accomplishments.02br
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002. All over the world Internet users not only have more and more access to the newest information but also appreciate most masterpieces many artistic masterpieces on museum websites. 02font
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0 Hi02br 02br 00My try is:02br 02br 001. It seems extreme and exaggerated to state that the true value of 01b 00a02b 00 civilization primarily relies on its artistic creation01b 00s02b 00 instead of its scientific achievements. 02br 02br 002.

  • 0 Hi02br 02br 00My try is:02br 02br 001.
  • It seems extreme and exaggerated to state that the true value of 01b 00a02b 00 civilization primarily relies on its artistic creation01b 00s02b 00 instead of its scientific achievements.
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0 Hi02br
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001. It seems extreme and exaggerated to state that the true value of 01b00a02b00 civilization primarily relies on its artistic creation01b00s02b00 instead of its scientific achievements. The fact is that the evaluation of a civilization should include both its artistic creat
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0Here is my take after looking at and learning from Mr. Paco's post:02br
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00It seems extremely exaggerating to state that the true leagacy of a civilization rests only on its artistic creations and not on its scientific achievements. The fact according to me is that the true legacy of a particular civilizationho should reflect both the artistic creations and scientific ac

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