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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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The speciality of her
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I also think she is a special teacher to me. One day, a naughty boy in my class repeatedly committed errors. At that time, teacher Amy helped him return to the proper path after going astray in all ways, such as encouraging him, reminding him don't do that even being angry with him. However, he didn't know his mistakes, and committed again and again. There were many people that thought he was just a bad guy, and no one could help him. But even so, teacher Amy kept talking to him, she never gave up. I think it's the speciality of her.
I also think she is a special teacher to me. One day, a naughty boy in my class repeatedly committed errors. At that time, teacher Amy helped him return to the proper path after going astray in all ways, such as encouraging him, reminding him don't do that even being angry with him. However, he didn't know his mistakes, and committed again and again. There were many people that thought he was just a bad guy, and no one could help him. But even so, teacher Amy kept talking to him, she never gave up. I think it's the speciality of her.
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I have underlined some problems and struck out some unnecessary words: I also think she is a special teacher to me . One day, a naughty boy in my class repeatedly committed errors. At that time, teacher Amy helped him return to the proper path after going astray in all ways , such as encouraging him, reminding him don't do that even being angry with him.
- I have underlined some problems and struck out some unnecessary words: I also think she is a special teacher to me .
- One day, a naughty boy in my class repeatedly committed errors.
- At that time, teacher Amy helped him return to the proper path after going astray in all ways , such as encouraging him, reminding him don't do that even being angry with him.
- However, he didn't know his mistakes, and committ ed again and again.
- There were many people that thought he was just a bad guy, and no one could help him.
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I have underlined some problems and struck out some unnecessary words:
I also think she is a special teacher to me. One day, a naughty boy in my class repeatedly committed errors. At that time, teacher Amy helped him return to the proper path after going astray in all ways, such as encouraging him, reminding him don't do that even being
I also think she is a special teacher
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I also think she is a special teacher. One day, a naughty boy in my class repeatedly committed errors. At that time, Amy helped him return to the proper path after going astray, such as encouraging him, reminding him not to do that angry with him. However, he didn't admit his mistakes, and did again and again. Many people though that he was just a bad guy, and no one c
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However, he didn't admit his mistakes, and committed them again and again. Many people thought that he was just a bad guy, and no one could help him.
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