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Averell Posted 21 years ago
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the sound of jazz with them (?) of traditional orchestration

Dear,

I have the following sentence: George Gershwin was an American composer whose concert works joined the sound of jazz with them of traditional orchestration.

It is said that this sentence had one problem, and I think that is them. But I dont know how to correct it.
Could you please help me?
  

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joined the sound of jazz with that of traditional orchestration. CJ

  • joined the sound of jazz with that of traditional orchestration.
  • CJ
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... joined the sound of jazz
with that of traditional orchestration.

CJ

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