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Kk Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
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00 The author doesn’t mention whether the company’s major product increased by over 200 percent last quarter is a long-term trend or only a sudden case. If it is just a short-term supply and demand in market, if its main competitor stopped manufacturing the same product last year, but now it resumes operation, if economic experts predict the economic recession is imminent, why can the company take the risk of building new plant? The above any factor can exacerbate the company’s financial condition; what is worst, it might lead the company to go bankruptcy. 0-
00 Hello, 02 br02 br
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00 I am not sure whether the short paragraph make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 02 br
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00 Can you give me a hand with checking them 02 br
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00 Thank you for your help. 02 pre
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00 The author doesn’t mention whether the company’s major product increased by over 200 percent last quarter is a long-term trend or only a sudden case. If it is just a short-term supply and demand in market, if its main competitor stopped manufacturing the same product last year, but now it resumes operation, if economic experts predict the economic recession is imminent, why can the company take the risk of building new plant? The above any factor can exacerbate the company’s financial condition; what is worst, it might lead the company to go bankruptcy. 0-
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02 br 02 br 00 First, change increased to increase. The company's increase by over 200 percent. " 02 br 02 br 00 Then you have a series of adverb clauses.
- 02 br 02 br 00 First, change increased to increase.
- The company's increase by over 200 percent.
- " 02 br 02 br 00 Then you have a series of adverb clauses.
- I'd separate them with semicolons.
- It will be easier to read them, make them stand out, and one of the clauses already has a comma.
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0 Here are a few suggestions. 02 br
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00 First, change increased to increase. The company's increase by over 200 percent. 02 br
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00 "Long- or short-term trend" might work better than your "only a sudden case." 02 br
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00 Then you have a series of adverb clauses. I'd separate them with semicolons. It will be easier to read them, make th
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00 First, change increased to increase. The company's increase by over 200 percent. 02 br
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00 "Long- or short-term trend" might work better than your "only a sudden case." 02 br
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00 Then you have a series of adverb clauses. I'd separate them with semicolons. It will be easier to read them, make th
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