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Jobb Posted 22 years ago
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The clarification of the dialectic relationship between the quality education and the moral education has a great significance in both theory and reality that deal with the comprehensive promotion of the quality education and the talent cultivation in universities.
  

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Er... Rather hard to understand at the moment. If you could explain what you mean by 'the clarification of the dialectic relationship' and 'the quality education' and 'the moral education' and 'comprehensive promotion' and 'talent cultivation' we might be able to help.

  • Er...
  • Rather hard to understand at the moment.
  • If you could explain what you mean by 'the clarification of the dialectic relationship' and 'the quality education' and 'the moral education' and 'comprehensive promotion' and 'talent cultivation' we might be able to help.
  • This sounds very jargonistic.
  • If this is being written for academics or people who are dealing professionally with this and will understand the jargon, fine.
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Er...

Rather hard to understand at the moment. If you could explain what you mean by 'the clarification of the dialectic relationship' and 'the quality education' and 'the moral education' and 'comprehensive promotion' and 'talent cultivation' we might be able to help.

This sounds very jargonistic. If this is being written for academics or people who are dealing professionall

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