The second writing. Hope it's better

The first writing exam was fixed by a lovely woman. It had a lot of mistakes. Therefore, I checked the 2nd writing more than 2 times to make sure that it could be better than the 1st .

I'm so willing to get help from you guys

Topic: Describe a website you use that helps you a lot in your work or studies.

My writing:

If you ask me about what the website helps me a lot to work is, I would say that it’s zing mp3. It’s the largest community of artists, bands, podcasters, and creators of music and videos in Vietnam. It’s similar to Soundcloud which has a giant music collection. It can be described as Youtube for music.

Even though Zingmp3 isn’t the education websites, researching websites and so on but it helps me a lot. When I’m working, hand in hand with the list of instrumentals, I feel better and solving the problems faster. Moreover, without pieces of music, I still can do my job by myself but there's an angle of my soul is disappear.

I usually listen to music without lyrics during the time. In the break-time, I would love to hear EDM music or pop music to refresh my mind. Finally, the important advantage of Zingmp3 is that it’s free in Vietnam, how amazing is it!