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Anonymous Posted 4 years ago
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The roaring sound of engines

In a diner:

Dave sits at a table drinking a soda when he hears the roaring sound of engines. He looks out the window and sees a bunch of bikers pulling into the diner's parking lot. They park their motorcycles and enter the diner.


- Is the underscored part a good and fitting description?

- Is the whole paragraph OK?

  

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anonymous - Is the underscored part a good and fitting description? It's fine. anonymous - Is the whole paragraph OK?

— Anonymous

  • anonymous - Is the underscored part a good and fitting description?
  • It's fine.
  • anonymous - Is the whole paragraph OK?
  • If we already know he's in a diner, you shouldn't say it.
  • If we don't know, just say it once: Dave sits at a table (in a diner) drinking a soda when he hears the roaring sound of engines.
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anonymous- Is the underscored part a good and fitting description?

It's fine.

anonymous- Is the whole paragraph OK?

If we already know he's in a diner, you shouldn't say it. If we don't know, just say it once:

Dave sits at a table (in a diner) drinking a soda when he hears the roaring sound of engines. He loo

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