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Mohamed Yehia Posted 13 years ago
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The reason for not liking songs !?

my reason for not liking the songs that it is obscured my vision and pointed me to certain feelings that might be not my inside feeling .i use to listen to classic music. it makes me feel that i have the suitable atmosphere and the melody to start with my vivid imagination .in most cases, it will be a precious feelings and reminiscences.
  

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If you start by capitalizing "I" and the first word of every sentence, I'm sure someone will help you with the rest.

  • If you start by capitalizing "I" and the first word of every sentence, I'm sure someone will help you with the rest.
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If you start by capitalizing "I" and the first word of every sentence, I'm sure someone will help you with the rest.
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Thanks . I always forget the capitalization . Emotion: big smile

My reason for not liking the songs that it is obscured my visi
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My reason for not liking the songs was that it they is obscured my vision and pointed me to certain feelings that might be not my inside feeling. I used to listen to classic
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Thank you very much David . I think i was completely wrong with using the correct tense.

My reason for not liking the songs was that they are obscured my vision and pointed me to certain feelings that might be not my inside feeling. I prefer listening to classical music. it makes me feel that i I have the a suitable atmosphere and the melody to start with my vivid imagination. I
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Hi Sarah,

No, not quite. You've missed some of my changes. I think this is because my strike-throughs fell off; so sorry about that.

Cross out "are" in the first sentence. Use a capital "I" for the start of the third sentence, and delete the little "i" and the "the" a few words later.

Wishing you every happiness.
David.
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Yeah. I got it , Thank you David . Happy Christmas Emotion: smile

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