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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary
The Puritans
Could you please check the following sentence?
Sometimes I really like to put on colourful clothes as hippies do and sometimes I only wear as plain and simple as it is possible as if being the Puritans.
Sometimes I really like to put on colourful clothes as hippies do and sometimes I only wear as plain and simple as it is possible as if being the Puritans.
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The last part of your sentence is confusing. I would put the sentence in parallel form. For instance: Sometimes I put on clothes as colourful as those worn by hippies, and sometimes I wear clothes as plain and simple as those worn by the Puritans.
- The last part of your sentence is confusing.
- I would put the sentence in parallel form.
- For instance: Sometimes I put on clothes as colourful as those worn by hippies, and sometimes I wear clothes as plain and simple as those worn by the Puritans.
- Note: I am using British spelling (American English uses "colorful").
- I hope this helps.
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The last part of your sentence is confusing. I would put the sentence in parallel form. For instance:
Sometimes I put on clothes as colourful as those worn by hippies, and sometimes I wear clothes as plain and simple as those worn by the Puritans.
Note: I am using British spelling (American English uses "colorful").
I hope this helps.
Sometimes I put on clothes as colourful as those worn by hippies, and sometimes I wear clothes as plain and simple as those worn by the Puritans.
Note: I am using British spelling (American English uses "colorful").
I hope this helps.
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