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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
The power of silence
Silence is the most effective word ; . Silence is the lowest tone that could be heard . Silence has the power to say much more than speech ; . Silence is the only language which is within everybody's reach . Silence has the most melodious tune; . Silence has the momentum to reach anywhere so soon . Silence has the ability to kill a life; . Silence has the potential to make someone live , who is dying . Silence can sometimes make you feel like in hell; . Silence at times tells you everything in life is going well .
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You dont need the so in , anywhere so soon. and instead of putting , make someone live, who is dying. maybe you should just put, make someone feel alive.
- You dont need the so in , anywhere so soon.
- and instead of putting , make someone live, who is dying.
- maybe you should just put, make someone feel alive.
- then instead of, like in ****, you should put, like you're in ****.
- but it still seems like its unfinished.
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You dont need the so in , anywhere so soon. and instead of putting , make someone live, who is dying. maybe you should just put, make someone feel alive. then instead of, like in ****, you should put, like you're in ****. but it still seems like its unfinished. That's all I have to critique about it. Sorry if it wasn't helpful.
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