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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
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The past history of

Please check out the following paragraph.

(1) The research of the agricultural lifestyle in the Qing Dynasty stresses the past history of the cultivation of Han Chinese in the region, the demarcation of reclamation area, and the improvement of productivity of the Yangmie Region by water conservation irrigation.

(2) They brought about / resulted in / caused / lead to the development of socio-economic in the Yangmei Region.
  

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I revise #1 as written. (1) The research of the agricultural lifestyle in the Qing Dynasty stresses the past history of the cultivation of Han Chinese in the region, the demarcation of reclamation area, going along with the construction of water conservancy facilities, and the improvement of productivity of the Yangmie Region by water conservation irrigation.

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  • I revise #1 as written.
  • (1) The research of the agricultural lifestyle in the Qing Dynasty stresses the past history of the cultivation of Han Chinese in the region, the demarcation of reclamation area, going along with the construction of water conservancy facilities, and the improvement of productivity of the Yangmie Region by water conservation irrigation.
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I revise #1 as written.

(1) The research of the agricultural lifestyle in the Qing Dynasty stresses the past history of the cultivation of Han Chinese in the region, the demarcation of reclamation area, going along with the construction of water conservancy facilities, and the improvement of productivity of the Yangmie Region by water conservation irrigation.
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