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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

the next purpose

Please help me correct the following paragraph.

The purpose of using Internet:
Boy students use Internet mostly for online games and searching for information is the next purpose, while girl students use Internet mainly for searching for information and chatting.
  

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Hi I think you just need "second reason" there. For example... - Boy students use the internet mostly for online games; searching for information is the second reason.

  • Hi I think you just need "second reason" there.
  • For example...
  • - Boy students use the internet mostly for online games; searching for information is the second reason.
  • Girl students use the internet mainly for searching for information and chatting.
  • Dave
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Hi

I think you just need "second reason" there. For example...

- Boy students use the internet mostly for online games; searching for information is the second reason. Girl students use the internet mainly for searching for information and chatting.

Dave
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The purpose of using Internet:
Male students use the Internet mostly for online games; searching for information is the second reason. Female students use the Internet mainly for searching for information and chatting.
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Hi

Yes, that looks good. Female students in the UK between the ages of 11 and 19 are referred to as girls or young women depending on context. Female students is a good neutral term

(And the same consideration applies to the boys)

Dave

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