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Dandelf Posted 22 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics
The newest song i have written, take note that i AM professional
my banana boats floatin down the stream and its big and yellllllloooooww im sailing through the RIVERRRRR in my weeee little banana boat I think its gonna rain rain down on my banana boat oooh oooh there goes my banana boat. Its a going down down the river its a flooding in my banana boat..bye bye banana boat, oooh oooh here i go, i dont knoooooow how to swim, uuuuh oooh, im going down down into the river lalala oooh oooh i drowned.
i just wrote it. i am so proud. what do you all think? i think its the best i have written so far.
c.
i just wrote it. i am so proud. what do you all think? i think its the best i have written so far.
c.
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Well, since these are lyrics. Quite funny ones, but you dont need to drag out the letters so much. It's a very, interesting song.
- Well, since these are lyrics.
- Quite funny ones, but you dont need to drag out the letters so much.
- It's a very, interesting song.
- A song about a banana boat, is pretty funny.
- The "lalala" could be taken out though, its just random, and not needed.
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Well, since these are lyrics. Quite funny ones, but you dont need to drag out the letters so much. It's a very, interesting song. A song about a banana boat, is pretty funny. The "lalala" could be taken out though, its just random, and not needed. Also, at first you said the banana boat was big, then the second line was a 'weee little banana boat' it just doesn't make sense. Other then that
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