1. Please help me correct the following paragraph. 2. Which is better, “while traveling to Phuket” or “while staying in Phuket” ? Does "while travelling to Phuket" mean "on the way to Phuket"? 3. Since I’m saying it’s a must see show, is it better to change “good” to “great” (a great entertainment park)
On day 5, we paid a visit to Phuket Fantasea because I had been told that it is the must see show while traveling to Phuket. It is a good entertainment park where you can see elephants, tigers, chickens and even goats in the show. The main attraction is the stage performance given by Thai actors, dancers and acrobats accompanied by their dozen massive elephants. It is quite impressive and I wonder how they trained them.
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1. Please help me correct the following paragraph. 2.
— Clive
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Please help me correct the following paragraph.
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Which is better, “while traveling to Phuket” or “while staying in Phuket” ?
The latter.
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1. Please help me correct the following paragraph. 2. Which is better, “while traveling to Phuket” or “while staying in Phuket” ? The latter. Or just eg While in Phuket.
Does "while travelling to Phuket" mean "on the way to Phuket"?