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Anonymous Posted 4 years ago
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The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, life become quick and busy so people utilize music as the same mental health treatment. In my opinion, I disagree with this viewpoint because it has many other music functions.

Cause of people thinks music can help people reduce stress because it has many types of music with distinct melodies, not only that some songs have meaningful quotes that can encourage people to feel happy and have a positive mood. For instance, I am a student but also an intern at a company, so I have more stress to control my purpose, I find music to chill with it and my emotional well-being is better. It is a treatment of mental health after a hectic day.

However, I trust that music has many functions that have more significant than helping people relax. To begin with, music has apex meaning about the educate people, especially children about the culture and traditional national values. For instance, national anthems which same a story that helps people remember soldiers who died cause of protecting their country in the war. Not only that, the music describes the culture of countries, such as Vietnam has 54 ethnic groups, and songs help show their national identity.

To sum up, music is an activity that helps decline stress for people, but culture and artistic function is more significant.

  

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