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Jackson6612 Posted 16 years ago
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The memories of the past have their own special space in our heart
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The memories of the past have their own special space in our heart. No matter how sour they were and still are, we will always sift the good ones even if there are only a few in thousands. Because there are some memories unexplainable; being a child is itself a good memory even though form some that time couldn't have been more scarier. But again time is like a sea which when wild devastates everything in its way but which when recedes to its boundaries looks as calm and beautiful as it has always been.
The memories of the past have their own special space in our heart. No matter how sour they were and still are, we will always sift the good ones even if there are only a few in thousands. Because there are some memories unexplainable; being a child is itself a good memory even though form some that time couldn't have been more scarier. But again time is like a sea which when wild devastates everything in its way but which when recedes to its boundaries looks as calm and beautiful as it has always been.
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Our memories of the past have their own special place in our hearts. (space is rather used to describe a room and not your soul, it does not reffer to anything spiritual)
Some memories are unexplainable. (you can`t start a sentence using because unless you point out what the clause you`ve introduced has caused: e.g Because the rain was heavy, we could
Some memories are unexplainable. (you can`t start a sentence using because unless you point out what the clause you`ve introduced has caused: e.g Because the rain was heavy, we could
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