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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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the man of the people

You have an image of the man of the people. From what I've seen from spending time with you for the the past few days, I believe, one of your ways that have helped you earn that is your morning jogs and swims in public places. Most of the time, you'll be stopped by your supporters to have a little chat with you. So, I wonder how are you going to maintain the image since you've recently taken on a lot more responsibilities? You might not even have time for your exercise, not to mention time to socialize.

Are there any mistakes?
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You have an image of the man of the people. From what I've seen after from spending time with you for the the past few days, I believe, one of your the ways ( but you list two, jogging and swimming) that have helped you earn that (earn what? ) is your morning jogs and swims in public places.

— Optilang

  • You have an image of the man of the people.
  • From what I've seen after from spending time with you for the the past few days, I believe, one of your the ways ( but you list two, jogging and swimming) that have helped you earn that (earn what?
  • ) is your morning jogs and swims in public places.
  • Most of the time, you'll be you are stopped by your supporters to have a little chat with you.
  • So, I wonder how are you going to maintain the image since you've recently taken on a lot more responsibilities?
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You have an image of the man of the people.

From what I've seen after from spending time with you for the the past few days, I believe, one of your the ways (but you list two, jogging and swimming) that have helped you earn that (earn what? The title/image man of the people?) is your morning jogs and swims in
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optilang I believe, one of your the ways (but you list two, jogging and swimming)
Should I say "two of the ways"???
optilang(earn what? The title/image man of the people?)
Yes. Is it too far from the first mention, thus requires a repetition?
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From what I've seen after from spending the past few days with you, I believe (note, no comma) that you maintain your/that image through (your) morning jogs and swims in public places. Most of the time, you'll be you are stopped by your supporters to have a little chat with you.
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I believe (note, no comma) that you maintain your/that image through (your) morning jogs and swims in public places.

Or better, perhaps

I believe that your morning jogs and swims in public places help to maintain that image.

as they are not the only two things responsible for his image.
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Sorry, another point

You have an image as the man of the people.
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