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User_gary Posted 19 years ago
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The lion had some mercy in his heart

0The lion had some mercy in his heart, so he left out the rat. After 2 years, again the rat and the lion met each other when the lion was caught by hunter in a trap. The rate reminisced the help done by the lion in the past, and the rat decided to help the lion. The rat muched the trap and released the lion.02br
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  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10User_gary12cite 10The lion had some mercy in his heart, so he 11del 10left 12del 11font 10let 12font 10out the rat.
  • After 2 years, again the rat and the lion met each other when the lion was caught by 11font 10a 12font 10hunter in a trap.
  • The 11font 10rate12font 10 11del 10reminisced 12del 11font 10remembered 12font 10the 11del 10help12del 10 11font 10[good/kindness] 12font 10done by the lion in the past, and the rat decided to help the lion.
  • 12br 12br 10Please correct my sentences.
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