The Lion!

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The Lion!!Lion waits, watches, creeps as his prey stays fast asleepQuiet, slow that lion does go not to awake his prized sleeping peepThen he jumps! Cuts through the air, silentlyHis prey unaware the dinner he will be[Y][N] How do you like my poem??Tell me![E]

BarbaraPA · Accepted Answer

This is what I think of when I think of peeps.

Anonymous · Answer

bizarre<img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/79.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/79.gif' alt='Emotion: shake'/>

Ayumiyoshi1314 · Answer

Please guys, why are you saying such mean things. I tried hard on the poem!!<img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/9.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/9.gif' alt='Emotion: crying'/>

Reckless_waltz · Answer

Im not very good at poetry but i'll give it a try:

The Lion!!
Lion waits, watches, creeps as his prey stays(lies?) fast asleep
Quiet, slow that(the) lion does go not(???) to awake his prized sleeping peep(what does it mean?)

Then he jumps! Cuts through the air, silently
His prey unaware the dinner he will be

Ok, my version:

The Lion
The Lion waits and watches his prey as it lies fast asleep,
Slowly and quietly, he creeps so as not to awake his prized meal,
Then he jumps, swoosh.. cutting through the air like a blade,
His prey still sleeping, unaware of the dinner he has become!!

Ayumiyoshi1314 · Answer

I love your version of my poem except for the meal part.
What means prey or meal but rhymes with creep and asleep?
Thank you for helping me though!!

Reckless_waltz · Answer

ayumiyoshi1314What means prey or meal but rhymes with creep and asleep?

Maybe the prey is a sheep, it rhymes with "creep" and "asleep".

Ayumiyoshi1314 · Answer

Good thinking!!!!!

Ayumi Yoshikawa

Kooyeen · Answer

The lion waits, thinks,
Will his girl tell him he stinks?
As his self-confidence crumbles away,
he waits, thinks and pray,
pray his girl will have pity
in his bathroom there was no TP,
he left in a hurry,
*** help him, a bit stinky.

I am sorry, I got totally crazy, and I made that up. I have serious problems, I know. But I kind of liked it. Notice how "pray" reminds you of "prey" too... That's pure art, isn't it? I am gonna get famous, I feel it. Gonna make a few thousand bucks out of it, oh yeah.

PS: Of course that "TP" was supposed to be pronounced with the stress on the first syllable, the T... TEEpee. Like Beavis pronounces it.

Reckless_waltz · Answer

KooyeenThe lion waits, thinks,
Will his girl tell him he stinks?
As his self-confidence crumbles away,
he waits, thinks and pray,
pray his girl will have pity
in his bathroom there was no TP,
he left in a hurry,
*** help him, a bit stinky.

I am sorry, I got totally crazy, and I made that up. I have serious problems, I know. But I kind of liked it. Notice how "pray" reminds you of "prey" too... That's pure art, isn't it? I am gonna get famous, I feel it. Gonna make a few thousand bucks out of it, oh yeah.

PS: Of course that "TP" was supposed to be pronounced with the stress on the first syllable, the T... TEEpee. Like Beavis pronounces it.

LOL! you are amazingly talented.. you should be a comedian!!

BarbaraPA · Answer

Yes, the lunatic aslyum where he lives always packs the house for the talent shows when Kooyeen is scheduled to appear. <img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/4.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/4.gif' alt='Emotion: stick out tongue'/>

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