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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
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The library
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It is our school library located in the heart of Kuala Lumpur. There are many kinds of / a wide varity of books such as science fictions, storybooks, encyclopedia, dictionaries and so on. A few tables and benches are provided in it. All books are arranged nicely and neat on the bookshelve
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Many pupils like reading books during recess time. They can borrow books from the library for three days. We can read or do our homework in it. Sometimes, we can play some indoor games with friends under the guidance of the librarians in the early morning.
We must obey the (library) rules whenever (we are) in the library. Every pupil has their responsibity to keep the library clean. We are not allowed to make noise or play in it. I love the library very much.
It is our school library located in the heart of Kuala Lumpur. There are many kinds of / a wide varity of books such as science fictions, storybooks, encyclopedia, dictionaries and so on. A few tables and benches are provided in it. All books are arranged nicely and neat on the bookshelve
s.
Many pupils like reading books during recess time. They can borrow books from the library for three days. We can read or do our homework in it. Sometimes, we can play some indoor games with friends under the guidance of the librarians in the early morning.
We must obey the (library) rules whenever (we are) in the library. Every pupil has their responsibity to keep the library clean. We are not allowed to make noise or play in it. I love the library very much.
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I have underlined some problem areas. I have crossed out wrong or unnecessary vocabulary: It is our school library located in the heart of Kuala Lumpur. There are many kinds of / is a wide varity of books such as science fictions , storybooks , encyclopedia , dictionaries and so on.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- I have crossed out wrong or unnecessary vocabulary: It is our school library located in the heart of Kuala Lumpur.
- There are many kinds of / is a wide varity of books such as science fictions , storybooks , encyclopedia , dictionaries and so on.
- A few tables and benches are provided in it .
- All books are arranged nicely and neat on the bookshelves.
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I have underlined some problem areas. I have crossed out wrong or unnecessary vocabulary:
It is our school library located in the heart of Kuala Lumpur. There are many kinds of / is a wide varity of books such as science fictions, storybooks, encyclopedia, dictionaries and so on. A few tables and benches are pr
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