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Mr. Tom Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
The king was responsible for a lot of commercial development in the country.
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Is this line natural? Any suggestions are welcome.
The king was responsible for a lot of commercial development in the country.
Thanks,
Tom
Is this line natural? Any suggestions are welcome.
The king was responsible for a lot of commercial development in the country.
Thanks,
Tom
Top answer
Yes it is.
- Yes it is.
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Yes.
It works just fine as it is, but I think it would be improved if you replaced a lot of with something like considerable, substantial, significant, extensive, much, etc.
It works just fine as it is, but I think it would be improved if you replaced a lot of with something like considerable, substantial, significant, extensive, much, etc.
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