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Essay & Composition Writing
The invisible hand
If you see any mistakes, please correct me. Thanks in advance.
At that time, the so-called ' invisible hand' was believed to be a coordinator or economy, but the Great Depression took place suddenly, so the government of each country was not able to deal with it.
At that time, the so-called ' invisible hand' was believed to be a coordinator or economy, but the Great Depression took place suddenly, so the government of each country was not able to deal with it.
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At that time, the ' invisible hand' was believed to be the controller of the economy, but the Great Depression struck suddenly , and no national government was able to deal with it. I don't think you need 'so-called'; the metaphor is pretty well known. I didn't understand the part about 'coordinator', so I have changed it to something more familiar.
- At that time, the ' invisible hand' was believed to be the controller of the economy, but the Great Depression struck suddenly , and no national government was able to deal with it.
- I don't think you need 'so-called'; the metaphor is pretty well known.
- I didn't understand the part about 'coordinator', so I have changed it to something more familiar.
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At that time, the 'invisible hand' was believed to be the controller of the economy, but the Great Depression struck suddenly, and no national government was able to deal with it.
I don't think you need 'so-called'; the metaphor is pretty well known. I didn't understand the part about 'coordinator', so I have changed it to something more familiar.
I don't think you need 'so-called'; the metaphor is pretty well known. I didn't understand the part about 'coordinator', so I have changed it to something more familiar.
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