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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

The Invasion

I woke up in the morning as usual on a Saturday morning; I changed clothes, wash myself and went downstairs to eat breakfast. As I was watching TV, the picture on the screen was gone. I tried to switch on the TV with the remote, but there was no signal. After that I went outside to switch on/off the main electricity board but again there was no signal.
  

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I have underlined some problems and struck out useless verbiage: I woke up in the morning as usual on a Saturday morning; I changed clothes, wash myself ( You washed yourself AFTER you changed clothes? ) and went downstairs to eat breakfast. As I was watching TV, the picture on the screen was gone .

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problems and struck out useless verbiage: I woke up in the morning as usual on a Saturday morning; I changed clothes, wash myself ( You washed yourself AFTER you changed clothes?
  • ) and went downstairs to eat breakfast.
  • As I was watching TV, the picture on the screen was gone .
  • I tried to switch on the TV with the remote, but there was no signal.
  • After that I went outside to switch on/off the main electricity board circuit breaker, but again there was no signal.
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I have underlined some problems and struck out useless verbiage:

I woke up in the morning as usual on a Saturday morning; I changed clothes, wash myself (You washed yourself AFTER you changed clothes?) and went downstairs to eat breakfast. As I was watching TV, the picture on the screen was gone. I tried to switch on the TV with the
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