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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

The interpretation of poem - check it, please. :D

A poem „We are going to see the rabbit" tells us about people who wants to catch sight of the rabbit. They are seeking it everywhere. They are in a hurry and can't wait to meet the bunny. They just desire to see it.
There are plenty of men. The policemen keep order. Also there are big loudspeakers, bands and banners. The people are tired cause they have came a long way. Suddenly the all of people get angry. Something has gone wrong. Everybody is jostling and complaining. The rabbit has gone into the earth by making himself a warren. The people are disappointed. That's a shame. Men have came thousands miles and actually haven't reached the aim. Unfortunately they have to go to home and do something else. However there's a chance to see the bunny. For sure it will come soon.

Let me know if there are mistakes.
If you would be so kind person correct it, in my opinion it doesn't look well. Emotion: stick out tongue

Regards
Croco
  

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Check/correct it, please. Tomorrow I gotta have it done. I will be thankful.

  • Check/correct it, please.
  • Tomorrow I gotta have it done.
  • I will be thankful.
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Check/correct it, please. Tomorrow I gotta have it done.
I will be thankful.
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Highlghted things you may want to fix.



A poem "We are going to see the rabbit" tells us about people who wants to catch sight of the rabbit.


The people are tired cause they have came a long way. Suddenly the all of people get angry.

Men have came thousands miles and actually haven't reached the aim.

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