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The inequality between rich and poor nations is wider than ever before

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The disparity in rich and poor nations has appeared for along time, but now, this gap is getting more and more expansive. In this essayI will discuss some reasons of this disproportion and how it can be minimized.

The most serious problem of poverty is the lack ofeducation. Many poor family cannot afford for their children to go to school asthey have to pay for tuition fees, learning tools and many other fees. Moreover,many young children have to go to work in order to improve the family economy. Agood illustrate of this is that on many streets in my countries, we can seemany poor kids hawking around from early morning to late evening. They spend mostof their time earning money and donnot care much about study. Those familythink that studies are not neccessary and waste time. However, without anyeducation, these children would not find a better job and they would keep beingpoor. Another reason for this difference arise from illegal usury .The poors areentangled with loan sharks, leading to a pile of debt. In fact, people who goto the gangster to borrow money are often unable to repay. Thus, no matter how muchthey earn, they will be forced to into debt. Therefore they will become poorerand poorer.

With the purpose of discrease the disparity, I would take a viewthat government should propagandize people to send their children to go to school.A policy on tuition fees exemption and reduction for students with difficult circumstancesmust be published to encourage all students to study. Also, goverment need tobe serious in prohibiting illegal usury so that people are not scammed andpiled up in debit. In addition, many charity organication should be open tohelp the poors to find a better job and improve their life.

In summary, there are many reasons impact the increases ofthe disproportion between rich and poor nations. Goverment should take care ofevery people so that everyone can be equal to others and descrease thedisparity between rich and poor.

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