The impact of social networking
In my opinion, social nextworking have both good and bad.It depend on your frequency. Social media is a place that you connect to other friends easily.. But it is not really good. someone can abuse to do bad things. It can help you for work, learning,seaching,but it lack of pricacy. Every one know your account,your picture, .Next,the damage of social netwwork give is isomnia,when you extremly concentrate on it,and don't want to put it don't. Social network can make conversasion between you and others, cause you can see them,talk to them through social media, with that, you never want to meet them in real life. Relationship on Internet on internet have both bad and good. The advantage of this is you can connect with new friends, chatting with friend and family. Besides social networking can be dangerous, strenger can bunco your money, your crebility. Social networking will useful if you use it in a right way.
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Your composition is understood but the thoughts need to be more focused and organized better so that it can create a smoother flow. To me, social media are sites like Facebook, Twitter etc. People use them to connect, gossip and share thougths and pictures.
- Your composition is understood but the thoughts need to be more focused and organized better so that it can create a smoother flow.
- To me, social media are sites like Facebook, Twitter etc.
- People use them to connect, gossip and share thougths and pictures.
- But they don't do very much in terms of helping you do research and work.
- It is a bit too time-consuming, but I took your first part and revised it because of the reasons I described above.
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Your composition is understood but the thoughts need to be more focused and organized better so that it can create a smoother flow. To me, social media are sites like Facebook, Twitter etc. People use them to connect, gossip and share thougths and pictures. But they don't do very much in terms of helping you do research and work. It is a bit too time-consuming, but I took your first part an
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