The Human Teacher VS Multimedia Tools

Hi~

I post my short essay on the subject " The human teacher may be replaced by multimedia tools for languge learning in the future."

My essay disagrees with the statement and tries to keep these conditions :

1. Include a topic sentence

2. Support your positions with TWO specific reasons.

3. Use approximately 100 words.

Please revise my writing and I also, if possible, welcome your opinion on the issue. Thank you.

The following is my essay :

The human teacher could not be replaced by multimedia tools for language learning even in the future.

First, language learning is more enhanced through an interaction in which each individual student is cared based on their background, multimedia tools are not intelligent and emotional enough to deal with all the students’ variations.

Second, the ultimate goal of language learning is to communicate with other humans using that language. In that sense, human teachers are most authentic resources to students and can provide real-like situations. This helps students feel less inhibited in a real world than after practicing with machines.