The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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A glance at the line graph provided reveals the figure of passengers in London Underground Station during the period from 6:00 to 22:00.
Overall, it ia evident that there is a considerable fluctuation in people who come to and leave in London Underground Station, with lows at 6:00 and 16:00 and highs in the times 8:00 and 18:00.
In the beginning of a day, this number is the lowest, 100 people. Then, the figure of passengers reach a peak of 400 people at 8:00. Between 9:00 and 15:00, the number of people who arrive and leave in station varies dramatically, around 250 people, before plunging to a low of just 100 people at 16:00. In addition, this is followed by a period of exponential growth, with a rapid climb, 100 people at 18:00 that is similar to the starting of the day. The latter period of the day, however, brings a sustained decline in this figure, around 150 people.

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

Hang VuLondon Underground

This is a name which means it has capital letters.

Hang VuStation

This is not a name so, it should have a small s.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

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Topic: The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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~~A glance at~~ (Those words do not describe the figure. In Task 1, only write about the figure, not your glancing at it.) . The line graph ~~provided~~ reveals (not a good word) the figure of passengers (This means that it reveals if the passengers were fat or thin. Avoid the use of "figure" in Task 1. In this context it means a diagram or illustration inserted into an article. ) in a London Underground station during the period from 6:00 to 22:00.

The line graph shows the variation in the numbers of passenger over the course of a (typical? average?) day in a London Underground station.
Overall, ~~it ia evident that~~ (Those words are not describing the data.) there is a considerable fluctuation (wrong word - variation) in people who come to and leave in London Underground Station, with lows at 6:00 and 16:00 and highs ~~in the times~~ at 8:00 and 18:00.
In the beginning of a day, this number is the lowest, 100 people. Then, the figure (wrong word) of passengers reach (wrong form) a peak of 400 people at 8:00. Between 9:00 and 15:00, the number of people who arrive and leave in station varies dramatically, (How much, in terms of percentage?) around 250 people, before dropping ~~plunging~~ to a low of just 100 people at 16:00. In addition, this is followed by ~~a period of exponential growth, with~~ a rapid climb, 100 (?? How can it climb from 100 to 100?) people at 18:00 that is similar to the starting of the day. The latter period of the day, however, brings a sustained decline in this figure, (wrong word) around 150 people. (How can it decline from 100 to 150?)

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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