The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph indicates London Underground station passenger in a day.

Overall, two times of a day have the highest number of people using station are 7:30 am and 5:30 pm.

First of all, the number of the station passenger lowest over the course of a day at 6:00 am with just 100 passengers. After this, the numbers rise quickly to 400 at 7:30 am before drop to less than 200 at 10:00 am. Between 11:00 am and 3:00 pm the numbers rise with 300 passengers using station.

In the afternoon, the numbers sharply decline with less than 100 people using station at 4:30 pm then take off to less than 400 at 18:30 pm. After 7:00 pm, the numbers of passengers drop quickly to more than 150 passengers at 20:00 pm. Between 20:30 pm and 22:30 pm has a slightly increase of the numbers.

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The graph indicates London Underground station passenger (No, it does not indicate one passenger's travel during a day.) in a day.

Overall, two times of during the day have the highest number of people using station are 7:30 am and 5:30 pm.

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The sentence is not grammatical. Here is a syntactic analysis of your sentence below. The words in brackets [...] make a complete sentence. The remaining words are just hanging out, a predicate without a subject. A main clause is not a valid subject of a verb.

[Overall, two times during the day have the highest number of people using the station. ] are 7:30 am and 5:30 pm. )

First of all, the number of the station passenger lowest over the course of a day at 6:00 am with just 100 passengers.

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This sentence is not grammatical. Where is the verb? Nowhere in your sentence. You don't need to repeat the description of the data point (number of passengers using the station) if you have defined what it is in the first paragraph.

Here is a correct version with the verb "occur."

First of all, the lowest numbers occur at 6:00 and 16:00 with just 100 passengers.

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After this, the numbers rise quickly to 400 at 7:30 am before drop to less than 200 at 10:00 am.

(This sentence is grammatical, but it fails to use parallelism:

After 6:00, the numbers rise quickly to 400 at 7:30 am before dropping to less than 200 at 10:00 am.

Between 11:00 am and 3:00 pm the numbers rise with 300 passengers using station.

In the afternoon, the numbers sharply decline with less than 100 people using station at 4:30 pm then take off to less than 400 at 18:30 pm. After 7:00 pm, the numbers of passengers drop quickly to more than 150 passengers at 20:00 pm. Between 20:30 pm and 22:30 pm has a slightly increase of the numbers.

Time values such as "22:30 pm" are incorrect. It is either 11:30 pm or 22:30. Be consistent in your time values. Use either a 24-hour system or a 12-hour system with designations of "am" and "pm." Since the graph uses a 24-hour system, that is the best choice for your essay. But you must put this information in your first paragraph.

Model paragraph:

The graph plots the number of passengers travelling through a London Underground station as a function of time of day. The time values are given using a 24-hour clock. The earliest time is 6:00 and the latest time is 22:00.

The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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