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Thaihaaaaaaa Posted 8 years ago
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The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features...

Given the 2 figure concerning electricity in England. The first provides data on the consumption of electricity demand between winter and summer of various hours, while the second indicates the furniture are powered by electricity.
It is apparent from the information supplied that the units of electricity in winter take the dominant part than summer. Increasing from approximately 35 at the beginning of a day to 40 at 3 o'clock. The expenditure then plunges to hit the bottom over 30 from 6 to 9 o'clock. There is an exponential growth reaching a peak of nearly 50 units of electricity at 23 o'clock. While the highest spending of electricity in summer always remains at 20 at 2 p.m and 11 p.m. In the other time, it fluctuates under 20 units of electricity.
Heating rooms and water consumes the highest amount of electricity at 52.5%. The usage of ovens, kettles, washing machines and lighting, TV, radio shares the same proportion at 15% for each. The rest belongs to vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools.

  

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Here are my suggestions. [Notes in brackets] Given the 2 The two figure s present data about the use of concerning electricity in England. [Use a complete introductory sentence.

  • Here are my suggestions.
  • [Notes in brackets] Given the 2 The two figure s present data about the use of concerning electricity in England.
  • [Use a complete introductory sentence.
  • ] The first compares provides data on the consumption of electricity demand between during winter and summer at of various hours, while the second indicates the furniture are what is being powered by electricity.
  • It is apparent from the information supplied that T he units use of electricity in winter is dramatically higher take the dominant part than in summer.
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Here are my suggestions. [Notes in brackets]

Given the 2 The two figures present data about the use of concerning electricity in England. [Use a complete introductory sentence.] The first compares provides data on the consumption of electricity demand between during winter and summer a

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