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Radrook Posted 22 years ago
The goddess
She lies amidst the glaring light--
blue-contoured on white sand.
And everywhere within her site
there is a dazzled man.
In alabastered ivory
she seems a goddess sent
to bless our visions tenderly
until our vision is spent.
The sands themselves are satisfied,
satiated by her form.
Impatient is the surging tide
this hot hellacious morn.
The clouds dip down as they pass by.
The horizon roils astir.
Libidoed is the blazing sky
just because of her.
Her grace in iridescence glows.
Sunglassed is her face.
Poised upon the sand she knows
the power of her grace.
The morning is ablaze today
with sun and sky and glare,
I sit in wonder in the shade
as the goddess reposes there.
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blue-contoured on white sand.
And everywhere within her site
there is a dazzled man.
In alabastered ivory
she seems a goddess sent
to bless our visions tenderly
until our vision is spent.
The sands themselves are satisfied,
satiated by her form.
Impatient is the surging tide
this hot hellacious morn.
The clouds dip down as they pass by.
The horizon roils astir.
Libidoed is the blazing sky
just because of her.
Her grace in iridescence glows.
Sunglassed is her face.
Poised upon the sand she knows
the power of her grace.
The morning is ablaze today
with sun and sky and glare,
I sit in wonder in the shade
as the goddess reposes there.
http://www.varietygalore.com/page/page/1283564.htm
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Glad you enjoyed the read.
Why did you like it?
Just curious.
Thanx for feedback.
Why did you like it?
Just curious.
Thanx for feedback.
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Any appreciation of beauty in the poetic way is good to read. Did you write this or is it written by someone else.
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This poem is one of my simplest.
I am a bit annoyed by your question.
I think it rude.
If indeed you have suspicions that I am a plagiarist, why not just do your investigations in private, gather the information you need if you find any which in my case you won't, and report it instead of coming on the forum with pestiferous, offensive, insinuations?
I am a bit annoyed by your question.
I think it rude.
If indeed you have suspicions that I am a plagiarist, why not just do your investigations in private, gather the information you need if you find any which in my case you won't, and report it instead of coming on the forum with pestiferous, offensive, insinuations?
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Dear Radrook,
Apologies for whatsoever the reason you felt my remarks insulting. I am sorry.
I was not rude with the question. It is not that I doubt your ability(why should I?). I just wanted information regarding any site where I could read more of such poems incase you had not written it and was available on the net. This is because I enjoyed reading it. Your answer could h
Apologies for whatsoever the reason you felt my remarks insulting. I am sorry.
I was not rude with the question. It is not that I doubt your ability(why should I?). I just wanted information regarding any site where I could read more of such poems incase you had not written it and was available on the net. This is because I enjoyed reading it. Your answer could h
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You insinuate dishonesty and do not expect a reaction?
Strange!
Everyone knows that not giving due credit when posting another person's thoughts, no matter in what the subject or in what manner those thoughts were written, be they prose, or poetry, or even drivel for that matter, and giving the impression that they are your thoughts by cunningly not mentioning author or source is a
Strange!
Everyone knows that not giving due credit when posting another person's thoughts, no matter in what the subject or in what manner those thoughts were written, be they prose, or poetry, or even drivel for that matter, and giving the impression that they are your thoughts by cunningly not mentioning author or source is a
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