The girl 2

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Mr XXX found the girl on one rainy evening while he was going back home from his office. Everyone at home was surprised when he entered his house with the girl. AAA and SSS observed her keenly. She was poorly dressed in a school uniform and was holding a magazine in her hand. They were very impressed by her taste of reading. This made her spirit high. Mr XXX kept the girl in his house on the condition that she would behave herself well. She would follow all the rules and regulations of the house. And lastly, she would take care of the likes and dislikes of the family members as they would take care of hers. She was happy with the commitment and had been following it willingly for the last three months.