Please read through this short paragraph and make corrections to the mistakes.
She went to her bedroom. She was so heart broken and dejected that she couldn’t compose herself for long. She was so upset. She was afraid that Mr XXX c might send her back to the place where he found her or the worse he might send her to the orphan house she fled from; the horrible part of her life. She would rather die than going back to that place, she thought.
sundarnaz or the worse he The second word is superfluous. sundarnaz might send her to the orphan house she fled from; Orphan house is a strange wording. It could be very old-fashioned.
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sundarnazortheworse he
The second word is superfluous.
sundarnazmight send her to the orphan house she fled from;
Orphan house is a strange wording. It could be very old-fashioned. I've only heard of orphanage.
sundarnazShe would rather die than go