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Mr. Tom Posted 6 years ago
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The garbage bag outside their house ...

Hi

Is this description natural English? Any suggestions please?

The huge garbage bag lay right outside their gate for days and then it burst open. The wind spread the garbage all around, following a bad smell.

Thanks,

Tom

  

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How about: The huge garbage bag lay right outside their gate for days before bursting open. The wind strewed the garbage and the smell was horrible.

  • How about: The huge garbage bag lay right outside their gate for days before bursting open.
  • The wind strewed the garbage and the smell was horrible.
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How about:

The huge garbage bag lay right outside their gate for days before bursting open. The wind strewed the garbage and the smell was horrible.

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