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Fizzi Posted 19 years ago
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0Would somebody please help me with my English?02br
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001. The School of Education took its first 100 students in June 2001. The students successfully graduated in 2006. Currently, the intake of new students is approximately 150 every year.02br
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0Hi Fizzi,02br 02br 00Seems pretty good to me. 02br 02br 01font 001. The School of Education took (01i 00it might be better to say 'accepted', or 'took in')02i 00 its first 100 students in June01font 00,02font 00 2001.

— Clive

  • 0Hi Fizzi,02br 02br 00Seems pretty good to me.
  • 02br 02br 01font 001.
  • The School of Education took (01i 00it might be better to say 'accepted', or 'took in')02i 00 its first 100 students in June01font 00,02font 00 2001.
  • 01i 00They02i 00 successfully graduated in 2006.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi Fizzi,02br
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00Seems pretty good to me. Try to avoid repetition of words.02br
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01font001. The School of Education took (01i00it might be better to say 'accepted', or 'took in')02i00 its first 100 students in June01font00,02font00 2001. 01i00T
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