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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
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the event occurred
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The event occurred when I was in elementary school. One morning I went to school on time as usual. As I went into the classroom, I found the teacher and students were all strangers to me. I was confused at that moment. A moment later, I sensed that I had entered the wrong classroom, and soon a blush came into my cheeks. So I said “sorry” to the class and turned about heading to my classroom directly. It was a really unforgettable experience.
The event occurred when I was in elementary school. One morning I went to school on time as usual. As I went into the classroom, I found the teacher and students were all strangers to me. I was confused at that moment. A moment later, I sensed that I had entered the wrong classroom, and soon a blush came into my cheeks. So I said “sorry” to the class and turned about heading to my classroom directly. It was a really unforgettable experience.
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It's very good. I personally would say I felt myself turning red or I felt my face get hot, rather than soon a blush came into my cheeks.
- It's very good.
- I personally would say I felt myself turning red or I felt my face get hot, rather than soon a blush came into my cheeks.
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It's very good. 
I personally would sayI felt myself turning red or I felt my face get hot, rather than soon a blus
I personally would sayI felt myself turning red or I felt my face get hot, rather than soon a blus
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