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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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The ending seems clumsy...

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The ending of this sentence seems clumsy... How can I change it?

I gained work experience working at international companies in the field of finances and creative sector.

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Anonymous The ending of this sentence seems clumsy. It seems muddy. What does 'creative sector' mean?

— Mister Micawber

  • Anonymous The ending of this sentence seems clumsy.
  • It seems muddy.
  • What does 'creative sector' mean?
  • Be clear and specific if you wish to please your reader.
  • You don't need both 'work' and 'working'; chose one.
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AnonymousThe ending of this sentence seems clumsy.
It seems muddy. What does 'creative sector' mean? Be clear and specific if you wish to please your reader.
You don't need both 'work' and 'working'; chose one.
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