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Nikitus Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

The disinterest in the subjects discussed at the table

Hello.


Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


"The disinterest in the subjects discussed at the table was an attitude that had grown increasingly more in Ted. Perhaps it was not the fact of considering them unimportant, but other subjects occupied their thoughts insistently. At the astonished look of his family, he got up from the table without saying anything."


Thanks.


  

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disinterest This word has more than one meaning, so it's better to say lack of interest. It's a bit odd to say that an attitude grows in a person . their thoughts Do you mean Ted's thoughts?

  • disinterest This word has more than one meaning, so it's better to say lack of interest.
  • It's a bit odd to say that an attitude grows in a person .
  • their thoughts Do you mean Ted's thoughts?
  • I'd reword this text quite a bit to make it sound more natural.
  • eg Ted's lack of interest in the subjects discussed at the table was increasing.
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disinterest This word has more than one meaning, so it's better to say lack of interest.

It's a bit odd to say that an attitude grows in a person.

their thoughts Do you mean Ted's thoughts?

I'd reword this text quite a bit to make it sound more natural.

eg Ted's lack of interest in the subjects discussed at the table was increasing. Perhaps i

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