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The differences between young people and old people are greater today than they were in the past.

The differences between young people and old people are greater today than they were in the past.
  • I agree with this statement for 2 reasons. First, older ganeration lost their political hegemony. For example, if in the past older ganeration believed that the Shah was a dictator and Khomani was a goog alternative, bitter political events in Iran, showed that the older ganeration were wrong. Therefore, nowadays the older generation don't have as much as influence on younge people as they had in the past. Second, nowadays, young people challenge religion,but in the past it was taboo to criticize religion. For example, one of Iranian researchers announced in VOA, according to his reaserach , the last prophet that is claimed disappeared, actually didn't exisits.
  

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I have underlined problem areas and struck out useless verbiage. Please post your revised paragraph. I agree with this statement for 2 reasons .

  • I have underlined problem areas and struck out useless verbiage.
  • Please post your revised paragraph.
  • I agree with this statement for 2 reasons .
  • Firs t, ol der ganeration lost their political hegemony.
  • For example, if in the p ast old er ganeration believed that the Shah was a dictator and Khomani was a goog alternativ e, bi tter political events in Ir an, s howed that the older ganeration were wrong.
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I have underlined problem areas and struck out useless verbiage. Please post your revised paragraph.

I agree with this statement for 2 reasons. First, older ganeration lost their political hegemony. For example, if in the past older ganeration believed that the Shah was a dictator and Khomani was a goog alternative, bitter polit

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