The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

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TOPIC: The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graphic above illustrates the structure system of a wave-energy machine and its place, where it can be placed. Generally, there are two main chambers in this design for a wave-energy machine, which provide the power to rotate the turbine.

The resources water, flow along the wave direction into the first compartment, which under the water. Subsequently, the level of the water rises up it created the air flow, it is the propulsive force to turn the turbine. As the same time, in the chambers, which located above the water, the air flow, through down and created the force to move the turbine. Briefly, the key for the electricity generator is the rotation of both turbines.

In the second diagram, we can see the productivity of the wave - energy generated, based on distinction between its positions. The wave-energy machine established nearly a shore with the smaller waves is get the lower output than the wave-energy erected far offshore with the higher waves. In addition, the cost of the installation is proportional to the place where it is put.

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panh16072001The graphic above

Do not use "above," "below," "given" or "provided" with the type of infographic.
Use correct names (see my advice for a list of names.)

panh16072001the structure system

Not a good phrase.

panh16072001~~Generally~~, there are two main chambers

Incorrect usage. Generally means that other similar systems have a different number of chambers. Only describe the one pictured, not others.

panh16072001the level of the water rises up it created the air flow, it is the propulsive force to turn the turbine.

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Panh16072001 · Answer

The graphic above illustrates the structure system of a wave-energy machine and its place, where it can be placed. As a whole, there are two main chambers in this design for a wave-energy machine, which provide the power to rotate the turbine.

The resources water, which flow along the wave direction into the first compartment under the water. Subsequently, the level of the water rises up it created the air flow, which is the propulsive force to turn the turbine. As the same time, in the chambers, which located above the water, the air flow, through down and created the force to move the turbine. Briefly, the key for the electricity generator is the rotation of both turbines.

In the second diagram, we can see the productivity of the wave – energy generated, based on distinction between its positions. The wave-energy machine established nearly a shore with the smaller waves is get the lower output than the wave-energy erected far offshore with the higher waves. In addition, the cost of the installation is proportional to the place where it is put.

Panh16072001 · Answer

The graphic above illustrates the structure system of a wave-energy machine and its place, where it can be placed. As a whole, there are two main chambers in this design for a wave-energy machine, which provide the power to rotate the turbine.

The resources water, which flow along the wave direction into the first compartment under the water. Subsequently, the level of the water rises up it created the air flow, which is the propulsive force to turn the turbine. As the same time, in the chambers, which located above the water, the air flow, through down and created the force to move the turbine. Briefly, the key for the electricity generator is the rotation of both turbines.

In the second diagram, we can see the productivity of the wave – energy generated, based on distinction between its positions. The wave-energy machine established nearly a shore with the smaller waves is get the lower output than the wave-energy erected far offshore with the higher waves. In addition, the cost of the installation is proportional to the place where it is put.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

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