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Oliver815 Posted 18 years ago
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00Nowadays, most big and advanced factories need more equipments, less workers. So a new vocation brought out for the managers to control so many machines with few labours, we called the new line-Automatic project control.02br
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00We use automatic control system mostly in iron works where there are lots of huge machines which are hardly operated by manpower, and sometimes it’s not convenient for workers to control the big machines just beside them, as the long distance between control center and the spot where the machines locate will take jockey so much time. For solve this problem, we begin to try to use a new system, which include industrial computer, low-tension apparatus, relay, switch, transformer, and the main part-we called it PLC(Programmable Logic Controller). By the industrial drawing software we can add all the machines need to be operated on the screen of a computer, and their location on screen is accord to the actual location outside. After completeing the drawing, we distribute a memory address of database to each unit displayed on screen, and then we will go on and edit the programme on the computer and download it into the CPU of PLC. Finally, we will connect all the computers and PLCs by Industrial Ethernet or Profibus. Thus, we have set up the whole control system, and the programme which control all the machines could absolute run automatically. The worker can operate one of the machines individually by just double-click on the screen, and most of the time, he can leave computers take their course by themselves. If we can disregard the failure of control-apparatus, it will be enough for only one person sit in the center control room, and the only thing what to do for him is just cleaning. With the nicer condition of machines outside, we can finish a control system as complicated as the one which used in a medium-sized iron works(about 450 steres) within fifteen days by three engineers. We are trying to serve the clients(the managers of factories mostly) with the most beautiful pictures and unimpeachable program. 02br
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001.00 00Plenty of coke and iron ore was send to the mouth of the furnace, there, the material passed first jaws-we called upper cover and got into the medium part of the furnace, and then, they went on passed the second jaws-we called nether cover and got into the abdomen of furnace. The action of the two jawses is separate the harmful gas from the air by alternate opening.02br
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002.00 00Hold by the strong press of the flaming air from dozen of meatus placed into the furnace, the material began to melt together in the air, and at the first time to see that I even could not believe the material can step to melting in a floating state!!!02br
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003.00 00The coke was burned out inside the furnace and turned into carbon monoxide. The gas passed through a pipeline and went into a gravitational dust catcher, where the bigger granules were filtrated off.02br
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004.00 00Then, the gas come to other dust catch system, we called hop-pocket dust cacther, where almost all impurity were filtrated off.02br
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005.00 00In the end, the gas entered heat air stove(maybe it’s called blast stove in USA), and was heated up to a high temperature about 1500 Celsius. With the big air pressure made by several huge fans outside, the gas was sent to the twelve meatus we mentioned above. And hereto, we have toured through an orbicular circulation fully. 02br
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00The melting material become to melton iron gradually and flowed out from a confined exit. Generally, if there are copulate steel-making workshops, the melton iron will be sent to those workshops directly and be made into steel there. If there no workshops like that, the melton iron will be moulded into rion blocks at normal temperature, and carried to other places to remade into steel.02br
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00We mainly use the products and softwares from SIEMENS and GE corporation. We look forward to use our native products.02br
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00Plus, if there are any mistakes about spelling and phrasing and syntax, please point them out directly, thank you!!0-
  

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02br 01i 01b 00I have underlined some problem areas, Oliver:02b 02i 02br 02br 01font 00Nowadays, most 01u 00big and advanced 02u 00factories need more 01u 00equipments, less02u 00 workers. 02br 02br 02font 02br 01span 00We01u 00 use automatic02u 00 control system mostly in iron works, where there are 01del 00lots of02del 00 huge machines which are 01u 00hardly02u 00 operated by manpower, and sometimes it’s not convenient for workers to control the big machines 01u 00just beside them02u 00, as the long distance01u 00 between control02u 00 center and the 01del 00spot where the02del 00 machines 01b 00location02b 00 will01u 00 take jockey02u 00 so much time. 01u 00For solve02u 00 this problem, we 01u 00begin to try to02u 00 use a new system, which 01u 00include02u 00 industrial computer, low-tension apparatus, relay, switch, transformer, and the main part01del 00-we02del 00 called01del 00 it02del 00 PLC (Programmable Logic Controller).

  • 02br 01i 01b 00I have underlined some problem areas, Oliver:02b 02i 02br 02br 01font 00Nowadays, most 01u 00big and advanced 02u 00factories need more 01u 00equipments, less02u 00 workers.
  • 02br 02br 02font 02br 01span 00We01u 00 use automatic02u 00 control system mostly in iron works, where there are 01del 00lots of02del 00 huge machines which are 01u 00hardly02u 00 operated by manpower, and sometimes it’s not convenient for workers to control the big machines 01u 00just beside them02u 00, as the long distance01u 00 between control02u 00 center and the 01del 00spot where the02del 00 machines 01b 00location02b 00 will01u 00 take jockey02u 00 so much time.
  • 01u 00For solve02u 00 this problem, we 01u 00begin to try to02u 00 use a new system, which 01u 00include02u 00 industrial computer, low-tension apparatus, relay, switch, transformer, and the main part01del 00-we02del 00 called01del 00 it02del 00 PLC (Programmable Logic Controller).
  • 01u 00By02u 00 the industrial drawing software we can add all the machines 01u 00need02u 00 to be operated on the screen of a computer, and their location 01u 00on screen02u 00 01u 00is accord to02u 00 the actual location outside.
  • After 01u 00completeing02u 00 the drawing, we distribute a memory address 01u 00of database02u 00 to each unit displayed 01u 00on screen02u 00, and then we 01del 00will go on and02del 00 edit the programme on the computer and download it into the CPU 01u 00of PLC02u 00.
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0 01b00Dear Mister Micawber :02br
00You are so kind to point out so many mistakes, thank you very much, though I study english for a long time, sometimes I feel my english is very poor, I will try to correct those mistakes, wish you a good day!02b
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