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Angliholic Posted 16 years ago
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The dancing steps of cats and dogs are lively and pleasantly loud

It keeps pelting down harder and harder.

The trees, flowers, and grass all join dancing to the rhythem of the melodious rain.

The rumbling thunders are drumming to keep the beat.

The dancing steps of cats and dogs are lively and pleasantly loud that I can hear them without stepping out.

All living things are awake and alive to the cool water.

Isn't it a great respite from a hot summer day?





Hi,

A while ago, it rained cats and dogs in this part of the world. I dashed off the above to record what I felt on my blog. Correct me where I go wrong, the italic line in particular. Thanks.

  

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Very good! The trees, flowers and grass all join in dancing to the rhythm of the melodious rain. The rumbling thunder is drumming to keep the beat.

  • Very good!
  • The trees, flowers and grass all join in dancing to the rhythm of the melodious rain.
  • The rumbling thunder is drumming to keep the beat.
  • The dance steps of the cats and dogs are so pleasantly loud and lively that I can hear them without stepping outside.
  • Every living thing is awake to the cool water.
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Very good!

The trees, flowers and grass all join in dancing to the rhythm of the melodious rain.
The rumbling thunder is drumming to keep the beat.
The dance steps of the cats and dogs are so pleasantly loud and lively that I can hear them without stepping outside.
Every living thing is awake to the cool wa
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Thanks, Mister.

After your rectification, it's as good as perfect!

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