park sang joon I think "because" should be replaced with "the reason why" in the light of the context. No; your suggestion reverses cause and effect, and it does not even fit into the sentence grammar. The original is fine.
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park sang joonI think "because" should be replaced with "the reason why" in the light of the context.No; your suggestion reverses cause and effect, and it does not even fit into the sentence grammar. The original is fine. Do these commas help you?—