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Goldenboy1 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

The content of the sentences

What do you think of the content of the following sentences? Are they well structured? Your help is highly appreciated.

My mother will return my keys this afternoon, but I won't be at home when she comes. But I have asked her to leave them with you. Can you please hold on to them? I will pick them up after work.

  

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Goldenboy1 My mother will return my keys this afternoon, but I won't be at home when she comes. (But) I have asked her to leave them with you. Can you have them ?

— Vsuresh

  • Goldenboy1 My mother will return my keys this afternoon, but I won't be at home when she comes.
  • (But) I have asked her to leave them with you.
  • Can you have them ?
  • I will pick them up from you after work.
  • It is fine as shown above.
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Goldenboy1My mother will return my keys this afternoon, but I won't be at home when she comes. (But) I have asked her to leave them with you. Can you have them? I will pick them up from you after work.

It is fine as shown above.

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Pretty good.

My mother will return my keys this afternoon, but I won't be at home when she comes so I have asked her to leave them with you. Can you please hold on to them? I will pick them up after work.

In speech, you'd use contractions.

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