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Sb70012 Posted 11 years ago
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The congress, while reviewing ...
The congress, while reviewing the next year's budget bill, refused to give (handling/controlling/managing) public schools to the private sectors.
Hello,
Would you please be kind enough to proofread this text to me?
I want to say that the congress disagreed that public schools should be managed/controlled by some private sectors.
Thank you
Hello,
Would you please be kind enough to proofread this text to me?
I want to say that the congress disagreed that public schools should be managed/controlled by some private sectors.
Thank you
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eg The congress, while reviewing the next year's budget bill, refused to give control of public schools to the private sectors. The meaning of 'control' in this context needs to be defined.
- eg The congress, while reviewing the next year's budget bill, refused to give control of public schools to the private sectors.
- The meaning of 'control' in this context needs to be defined.
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eg The congress, while reviewing the next year's budget bill, refused to give control of public schools to the private sectors.
The meaning of 'control' in this context needs to be defined.
The meaning of 'control' in this context needs to be defined.
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Additionally, "private sectors" doesn't sound right to me. I would say "the private sector". Be aware that "public school" means completely different things in different countries. Check whether "Congress" is conventionally capitalised in the context you are using it.
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